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Ember Casey

  • hebs78je citiraoprije 4 mjeseca
    Luca’s waiting for me in the foyer when I head downstairs.

    Scene should be more climactic of a moment when he sees her all dolled up for the first time

    Also, I was not planning on proofreading or noting my edits and suggestions but this was too much of an egregious mistake and disservice to be ignored

    There are numerous errors and edits to be addressed before this

  • hebs78je citiraoprije 4 mjeseca
    ?” There are some grass and dirt stains o

    Singular or Plural: 'are' or 'is'

    'There are some grass and dirt stains on'

  • esisay017je citiraoprošle godine
    I swear, the last time I glanced at the time it was three o’clock.”
  • Darijana Totje citiraoprije 5 mjeseci
    It’s hard to remember the number with Calder’s mouth teasing my ankle and his fingers caressing my thigh.
  • b3148532147je citiralaprije 16 dana
    Or have to take a week off every time I had my period.
  • b3148532147je citiralaprije 16 dana
    And I can probably blame the cocoa, but I have the strangest, most vivid dreams.
  • gevedean willemseje citiraoprije 2 mjeseca
    “Did you hear me laugh?”

    “You don’t have to laugh out loud,” she replies. “You’re laughing inside. I can tell.”

    “I just wanted to drink in peace,” I tell her.

    “Oh.” Sh
  • gevedean willemseje citiraoprije 2 mjeseca
    “I’d probably lose my job if anyone found
  • gevedean willemseje citiraoprije 2 mjeseca
    I frown. “Noah? Who’s Noah?” I glance around for that young server she crashed into out in the pavilion. Surely, she can’t be picking that mouse of a man over me.

    Lauren, meanwhile, hasn’t said a word. But her face has gone pale, her freckles standing out against her nearly white skin.

    “Who’s Noah?” I ask again.

    “No one,” she insists, turning back to her task.

    Like hell he is. “No one” wouldn’t make her lose all color. Or make me wonder if she’s suddenly forgotten how to breathe.

    “If there’s another man, you only had to say so,” I grumble. “I have no interest in another man’s woman.” I realize as soon as the words have left my mouth that it’s not entirely true. I’m certainly still interested in Lauren—but how much? Enough to willingly entangle myself in such a complicated situation?

    She doesn’t answer me. Instead, she says, “I think you should go now.”

    I should—both because she’s
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